Saturday, December 18, 2021

Jab Aaftaab dhalnay lagay - When the sun starts to go down

Jab Aaftaab Zindgee ka 
dhalnay lagay 
Vaqt - jab haath say 
phisalnay lagay  
Umra bhar sajaayaa 
- sanvaaraa jisay 
us Tan-bhavan ki neemv 
jab hilnay lagay  
Har shai jab dhundhali see dikhnay lagay 
Daant girnay lagay - Baal paknay lagay 
Saanson ka kaarvaan bhi thaknay lagay  

Alfaaz  - 
jab Zubaan pay ladkhadaanay lagain
Paanv - Chaltay huye dagmagaanay lagain  
Haath - Uthtay huye kampkampaanay lagain

khoob-soorat jism jab 
honay lagay nidhaal 
Dil ki dhadkanay bhi jab 
honay lagain betaal 
Vaqt jab thamtaa huaa lagnay lagay   
Saans bhi ruk ruk kay jab chalnay lagay

Farq Such aur jhooth ka -
us vaqt samajh aaye - to kyaa
Apnay karmon par agar 
us vaqt pachhtaaye - to kya 
Ashq nadaamat kay aankh mein bhi bhar aaye 
- to Kya?

Kyonki -
ae meray ham dam  
us vaqt to der - 
Bahut der ho chuki hogi 
Zahaanat  - 
Sab saazo-saamaan kho chuki hogi 
Zindgee thak har kay tab so chuki hogi 
islaah kay saaray imkaan kho chuki hogi 

Bas - abhi kuchh vaqt hai 
Kuchh sochnay - samajhnay kaa 
Kuchh paanay kaa - kuchh bananay kaa 
Kuchh kehnay, sunanay, sehnay kaa
Kuchh karnay - ya na karnay kaa
Sabr-o-sidaq
aur chain aman say rehnay kaa 

Bas -  yahi to vaqt hai 'Rajan'  
Sirf yahee ik vaqt hai 
Khud apnay aap say milnay kaa 
aur Jaan kay Sach -
phir Sach ki raah pay chalnay ka 
                                     ' Rajan Sachdeva '
Aaftaab    =      Sun
Ashk       =  Tears
Nadaamat  =  Repentance 
Ham Dam  = Life-log friend or companion 
Zahaanat  = Intelligence 
Islaah = betterment, improvement, rectification 
Imkaan =  Possibility, chance, opportunity

(islaah kay saaray imakaan kho chuki hogi = utkarsh ke sab avsar kho chuki hogi)

7 comments:

  1. Walaikumsalam
    huq zindagi ka sahi naqsha nazm main bayan kerdye bahut khub andaz hai
    Sameder ko kuzey main bund karne ka fun hai

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    1. Thank you sir
      Glad to know you liked it
      I am not a poet - but trying to learn
      I love Hindi and Urdu poetry
      and I just try to give words to the thoughts that come to my mind - in my own simple elementary way.

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  2. This is wonderful - thank you so much ❤️

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  3. Beautiful beautiful beautiful ❤️

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  4. Rajan Jì. Amazing & very very realistic & true Jì. Keep blessing Jì. ������������

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  5. Beautiful beautiful beautiful ❤️

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  6. Amazing poem which is depicting the reality of life ������

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