चलो अंजाम दें उसको अभी जो काम बाकी है
अभी सूरज नहीं डूबा अभी कुछ शाम बाकी है
अभी ताब-ओ-तवां है होश है हाथों में भी दम है
अभी 'राजन ' सुबू-ए-ज़िंदगी में जाम बाकी है
" राजन सचदेव "
ताब-ओ-तवां = ताक़त , शक्ति और सहनशक्ति
Ability to apply and resist force
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ReplyDelete“Sahi hidayat” “Sahi farmaya”
ReplyDeleteBahut Shukriya - Bahut inaayat
Deleteबहुत दौड़ हो गई राह ए जिंदगी में बस आराम बाकी है
ReplyDeleteThank you -- I was also thinking on these lines -- with Aaraam kafiya but it didn't fit in the Behar - in proper meter.
DeleteI am still thinking of expanding this Qat'aa into a Ghazal -- and I will see if I can come with proper Vazan for this one.
Thanks again for your input. I wish you had at least added your name with the Anonymous comment -- or at least a partial name
बहुत खूब!!!
ReplyDeletevery nice 🙏🏻🙏🏻🌷👍
ReplyDeleteAwesome
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